feedback on the auteur presentation

to improve my presentation i needed to explain the auteur theory more so the viewer of my presentation would have a clear understanding of what an auteur is if they had never learnt about what one is.  though i did include good examples of the proof of del toro being an auteur visual and written. i used lots of visuals more than written as del toro is a very artistic man and his films focus on the artistic elements of the creatures and such. to also improve i need to include more technical film language as my use of that was very limited and including this would show my understanding of the task more.
i could also improve more by creating my own video essay as that would show that i understand why he is an auteur and show how i understand film and see the signature style of the director. i could also write about if and how the directors past and childhood effects his style and how he may incorporate that in there and the fact that he draws his own creatures and the fact that its mostly just makeup as he wants it to seem as real as possible .